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Excellent

This reminds me of music from the Zelda series; When things are tranquil that is. Perhaps a little more variation would've done you well? I feel like you could maybe expand on this and make it have a powerful ending or something.

Haha

Beautiful piece, as said below, the instruments blended very well, and it made me start conducting to myself, that must mean it's good! It could be improved with a little more melody variety, and perhaps a little longer.

Nice

Well performed, I think it's a beautiful piece no matter how it's performed, might I suggest making it slightly faster, and the electronic thing in the mdidle kinda threw me off a little. Overall, good work.

Fantastic

I havn't listened to your pieces in quite a while, and I looked at a PM from you months ago and thought I'd look you up. You are doing very well! Beautiful piece; Couldn't be improved.

Zero123Music responds:

haha lol, I thought I lost you D';

thanks a bunch for the ten :)

Nice

This is some great work. Very peaceful; sounds like the kind of music you'd listen to on the beach. I would consider adding some waves in the background for a slight ambience. This was very enjoyable; Downloaded of course.

Boux responds:

thanks alot, yeah waves could fit in the beginning but theres no nature sounds i've found in garage band yet.

Good

The name made me fearful at first. It looked like a spam entry, but it ended up being pretty decent! A little more variation would get you farther, try and mix it up a bit.

I find the lack of reviews disturbing.

This is a good piece. Would make great background music to a puzzle game. I don't see how it could be improved for the category/uses I have in mind, so 10/10.

yotipo91 responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I made this a few months ago; I found this after digging in my recovery hard drive. Luckily after my hard drive crashed, it was repairable, and this was still on it.

It could have been better.

The intro got a bit awkward in some spots, the drums going into the main part was nice however, and quickly made up for it. Then, the actual song got repetitive. For a quick-job, it's nice. I think you could've done better with it though.

Fantastic

I really liked it alot, the slight drum cadence sort of thing towards the middle was a nice touch. The flute/piccolo were a bit awkward in the middle, but it was amazing overall. I feel like you almost could've allowed a flute solo in the middle to give it a sad little moment, followed by building back up to the original song, if you're going for general effect. Fantastic work overall, I look forward to more work from you.
Since there is no 9.5, I'm giving you a 10.

SniperSnake19 responds:

Yeah I wanted to give pretty much every section of the orchestra its own moment. But that would make it maybe a little predictable and takes away some of the magic.

Thank you for the kind and objectives words!

Spine Therapist

Very nice

Its simplicity and light feel gives it a good puzzle game feel to it. I like it alot, not much can be done to improve, but perhaps you could take it a whole new direction and make an orchastral version come out of that intro? Please? :)

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